Wednesday, September 8, 2010

"The Pedestrian" Center for Regressive Tendencies Paragraph

I walked in the center there was nothing but tvs and other tech things. My first day there they mad me sit down and watch some show that was highly addictive. I sat there watching tv for hours and hours. I wanted to take my daily walk but they told me that there will be no more walking only driving. I begain to think, "Is this how my whole life is going to be?" I looked at myslef in the miror to see myslef geting a little big everyday.

1 comment:

  1. Broderick, this was going somewhere. I wish that you had written more. Remember to proofread and edit your work before posting it. Ask a peer or an adult to help you with proofreading.

    ReplyDelete