Character to Person Comparison Paragraph

I can see myslef being like Maggie in a way because I like everything and everyone in my family to look good. Some time that could be bad and some ways it could be okay. I see myslef looking at my stepbrother and when he has on beat up shoes or anything I would just want to go out and buy him some new ones so that other people don't look at the both of us becuase of one little fall back. I also do the same with my dad but I don't really say anything about it becuase he gets mad at me.