Thursday, September 9, 2010

Mouse in the Cafe Short Story

There once was a boy named Ben he was on hi was back home from school, he was already for his birthday until he found out that his party was going to be cancelled. He ad spent his whole week planing and inviting people, he even spent money on the party favers. He went up to his mom and asked her if he could have the party, she ended up saying no becuase she wants family time. He went and asked his dad and his dad said ask your mom. Ben was upset and he didn't want to have a brithday. The day Ben's brithday came he trapped himslef in his room. that gave is family time to set up a surprise party. Ben walked out of his room and find all his friends and family yellling happy brithday. In the end ben got just what he wanted for his brithday and that was to spend time with friends anf family.

1 comment:

  1. This isn't about a mouse in the cafe. Please read and follow directions carefully. In addition to that, you also need to proofread and edit your work before you post it. There are many errors in this post.

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