Tuesday, January 18, 2011

“Animal Farm” Revolution at SPA

If the students here at SPA had a revolution I really believe that I would be like Boxer in the short story "Animal Farm". Boxer is a hard worker and gives good ideas but is not the leader of the Revolution even though he should be. Spa Revolution would be about the freedom that we may not get here, kids would break all the rules to upset staff and other workers. The Revolution would change SPA forever, by letting the kids be free with little rules. Students at SPA would have no reason to blame others because it's their rules and their change.

1 comment:

  1. Broderick, please read and follow directions carefully. This paragraph lacks third-person narration and is not at least two hundred words.

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