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"The Cold Equations" from Marilyn's Point of View

When I was a child around the age of eight I would always get into stuff, like the candy jar my foster parents had. It took them weeks to realize what was going on. One day after school I went to get some candy not knowing that there was a fake spider and a note in the jar. I opened up the jar and I jumped higher than I ever just. I dropped the jars and the glass broke and then I seen the note that stated. “No needs to take just ask.” From that day I promised to ask before I take something.

"The Cold Equations" from Marilyn's Point of View

It was a nice day I spent most of my time helping out the young kids and cleaning up after the old. I had three gold rippins for being the nice and helpful kid in the town. The prince had invited me of a day at his park, the park that no one ever gets to go to. In the park there was lots of pigs and no follow I guess it's was becuase the pig would eat them. Well anyways as I well as I walked I seen this big dog or wolf. I started to run and jumped into a bush. I was scared I started to move so I could make a break for the front gate. The wolf hearded me and jumped into the bush then everything went black.

"The Storyteller" - Memorable Books from My Childhood

1. Cat in the Hat by Dr. Sues
2. Green Eggs and Ham by Dr. Sues
3. One Fish Two Fish Three Fish by Dr. Sues
4. Blues Clues
5. Last Day Blues

-Cat in the Hat was my favorite book when I was younger becuase that was the first book my teacher ever had my class read. I also love Dr. Sues book, I think that he's a good writer for younger kids.

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Autobiographical Narrative - Prewriting - Memorable Days

1. In a football game I got a concussion. Even though I don't really know what happened the pain I will never forget.
2. The day I busted open my head in basketball.
3. When I was little I got token way from my family.
4. My day I went to the D.C. trip in middle school.
5. The death of my 21 year old brother.
6. When I was like six or seven I was racing someone and I ran into a poll of the gate and busted my eyebrow open.
7. When I was 10 I got in the biggest car crash of my life.
8. The day my mom left to move to New York without her two youngest kids
9. When I was younger I bushed open my lip on a sharp pointed type thing.
10. The day I had a fever of 199.